me and my class have been learning about a story that we have been writing about
and please comment on my work and give me feedback
Once upon a time there were 3 magical warrior. there names are sub zero smoke and scorpion sub zero loves playing in the snow. but smoke and scorpion don’t like playing in the snow. scorpion love fire he plays around with fire he is a criminal he.
loves hurting his brothers with his fire powers. Now smoke smoke is one of the stronger brother he loves saving people from fire scorpion is the bad brother of them three he likes killing the humans but sub zero and smoke loves helping humans
from scorpion scorpion is not like them he is something bad he is not like an good warrior
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